The Story of Zoe

When Zoë is tasked with creating an Erotic story for her fiction writing class she shoots caution to the wind, detailing her most secret desires: to be dominated.

Professor MacCoolan is surprised, but intrigued by Zoë’s story. The characters seem awful familiar to him. When he questions Zoë if the hero is himself she gives in to her fears and reveals it is indeed non other than Professor MacCoolan, a.k.a Cool.

Cool wants nothing more than to fulfill Zoë’s fantasies and immediately begins commanding her to obey his wishes. He tells her upfront this is strictly fulfilling her fantasies and will never amount to anything more.

But will Zoë fall for her master, when he gives her a collar and states it’s as significant as an engagement ring? Or will this submissive grow tired of her master and move on to something more?

THE STORY OF ZOE is an interesting read. Ms. Rayne did a great job with this story. This reviewer was held captive wondering what would happen to the heroine from page to page. The premise of the story, student writes her darkest wishes, teacher obliges, wasn’t unique, but that didn’t stop Ms. Rayne creating a riveting tale. This reviewer had no issues continuing on with reading this short tale straight through the end.

What impressed this reviewer the most with this tale was how the Submissive struggled with her feelings towards the Master. Zoë wasn’t sure this was the life she dreamt it would be. Zoë had doubts about the Master to the point she questioned if he was the right choice for the role of Master. The submissive turned the tables on the Master and momentarily commanded HIM and he submitted! The submissive stepped out of the norm.

THE STORY OF ZOE is worth the read if you are looking for a short tale of Master and Slave.

August 2006